saber
Loner
[M:0:0:0:0:][M:0]
I like pleasure spiked with pain, and music is my Aeroplane
Posts: 6
|
Post by saber on Apr 19, 2011 16:53:52 GMT -5
To the great Risa <3You stutter and you trip, Your clumsiness can't get a grip, You look at your hands, rip and torn... ...But your still caged inside As society scorns Black ashes, gray sky Your motionless, and you can't breath inside Whispers gather in the dark, But you know your death is marked. You know your caged inside... ...... And paralyzed Let me know if your honest opinions and don't lie. I think I'm terrible at poems but at least I tried, Risa.
|
|
|
Post by {Risa} on Apr 20, 2011 15:22:28 GMT -5
You are deffentally much better at poetry than me xD Lol. I can't write any kind of poem what so ever. I'm inept.
But I like it =33 You did well ^^
|
|
saber
Loner
[M:0:0:0:0:][M:0]
I like pleasure spiked with pain, and music is my Aeroplane
Posts: 6
|
Post by saber on Apr 20, 2011 20:39:52 GMT -5
Thanks, I was thinking it would be a little too awkward.
|
|